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My beloved one

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Post by Mohamed LAHRI on Sun Dec 14, 2008 11:38 am

My Beloved ONE



I waited for a long term
Hopefully that she would return;
With a smile on her face,
She would meet me in the place.

The clouds of the sky
Created the tears in my eye;
I didn't know that it was a sign
For my heart to cry..

Iam sad..
Iam in a bad temper..
Iam about to be mad
Because of your absence..

I wish you could be here..
I wish I could be there..
Just wanna be with you-Once more,
Opening the closed door;
The door of sadness,
The one of madness..
If only you could do it,
My Beloved ONE


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Re: My beloved one

Post by saidkarim on Sun Dec 14, 2008 2:34 pm

Nice rhymes brother! The She-Beloved must be proud of you NO DOUBT...
But I really wish you had written these lines for another Beloved "Our Beloved"...
May Allah be Pleased with you...



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Re: My beloved one

Post by hammani12 on Mon Sep 26, 2011 8:14 am

Great! Keep on trying on different stanza!

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